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Project I: Observation Essay

Assignment Description:

Choose a college or university in the D.C. area to visit. You’ll find below a list of possible institutions. Then select a space within that institution where you can observe “education in progress” – e.g., a library, a computer lab, a study area, a coffee shop or commons area where students gather to do schoolwork, etc. your goal is to observe students’ behavior and get a sense of how they behave in your particular educational setting.

Possible institutions to visit:

American University

Catholic University

Gallaudet University

George Mason University (I chose Starbucks in this university)

Process:

You will want to visit your place during hours when many students are present so that you can observe a large enough sample of people. Friday nights and Saturday mornings are probably not optimal times to observe education at work. You may first want to walk through the space, taking detailed notes on its physical qualities. Remember to use your senses. Take notes on its layout, any objects, what people do there, how they move through the space, and any other details that seem interesting, revealing, significant, or strange. Pay particularly close attention to the way the place is set up to serve an educational purpose and to the way people within the space are pursuing their education. Are they working on school-related projects? Writing papers? Studying for exams? In what subjects? Are they web-surfing or social networking? Multitasking? Do they discuss classes, assignments, or other education-related matters? What do they say?

3 pages length ,double spaced

Use easy english 

Here are some notes that i took and i want u to include in the essay :

– I walked in around 6 clock

– There was approximately 10-14 people 

– Most of them are females

– A lot comes in pairs

– The place can can hold 20 people at once

– The atmosphere is good for studying 

– Outdoor and indoor seats  

– Most of people there are drinking cold coffee 

**I already did it but i want you to edit on it and make more professional, changing order, add more sentence